When it comes to making the changes to my research essay, I need to make my freaking point more clear in my introduction. There are two different sentences in my essay and it seems like readers can't decide which one is my thesis from there. Also in my first body paragraph, I plan to add in my statistics there rather than in my person experience paragraphs. Along with some other small edits I find in the process of making these bigger changes.
I'm going to add in my essay about senior year being a very stressful time. I personally thought this was one of my strongest essays I've written this semester. It was easy to write to since I'm fresh out of high school. I think it'd be nice in my portfolio.
My reflection essay is definitely going to be fun to think about how I've changed as a writer throughout the semester. I plan to discuss how the mini essay was a preview to see how you as a teacher grade and what is expected, and then go from there and talk about how your teaching style helped me learn a lot this semester.
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