Tuesday, September 23, 2014

ATTACK OF THE ENGLISH TEACHER
    By Renee Fannon

       From observing "Attack of the English Teacher" I was able to learn see how each of the students has their own creative twist on each of their posts. Actually, the first post I saw was about this very same assignment and the author was actually reviewing our blog. I thought that was ironic, and also his statements about the name of our blog made me giggle. Another student had a really eye catching title "Student Blog Battle!" in big bold letters really caught my attention and made me want to read their review. As any English student knows, a strong piece of writing always needs to have something to hook you into reading. This author did an excellent job at grabbing my attention, so A+ on that!

        As far as constructive criticism goes, the posts were really different and I loved that about the blog. However, the background is a little boring. The background was just plain books, if I was too have stumbled across this blog on the internet I would probably close out of it due to the fact that their background is just rows and rows of books. Do something a little more exciting! You're blog name is fun and creative, so this blog group should obtain that same creative and fun tone even throughout the background!

        Their frequency of posts is just as I expected. All of the members of the group seem to post when they are supposed to and ALL member contribute to the posts! Their blog is easy to follow, there are clear headings so I know exactly when a new post is beginning. They are very organized in a good way. The actual content of the writing is fun to read and I actually found myself reading many of their posts! I really enjoyed visiting this blog, and who knows, maybe I'll check it out again!

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